I've finished 5 pages so far and no 2 are the same height. Oh well.
Is the roach fully visible in this first frame? I'm afraid that all of this black is going to obscure the roach and basically ruin the focus of the story. In the instant frame I'm somewhat concerned that the collar of the shirt is confusing the line of the the roach. Agree? Disagree?
Your opinion matters.
2 comments:
The collar does confuse the line a little. That being said, I draw stick figures so I wouldn't put much stock in my artistic critique.
I was confused by the collar line but not by your blog. The fact that you are so open about your process is a big WOW to me. Love it.
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